Monday, December 6, 2010
Blog 75
Hello! My name is Youngwook Kim. I took English 110 a quarter before you guys. I wrote many papers during the quarter and although they were kind of hard to write at the time I was writing, I think it improved me with my writing skills. While I am foreign student, my English was not very good. Before taking this class, I was kind of afraid of how I will do with the class because it is the class I have to take with Americans. I had many difficulties when writing the papers. However, the teacher helped me a lot by answering my questions carefully. As a result, although I was not good with writing and I got bad grade for the first paper, I did better for the next one and keep doing great for other papers. There should be some students who are foreigners and afraid of taking English class. I am not going to say this class is easy to take. However, if you try hard and ask questions to teacher, this class would not be very hard. Also, I am not sure that you guys are going to do the same thing but the most of the class were about science fiction and they were really funny. Lastly, the most important thing is the BLOG. We are writing 250 words blog everyday!!! I know it is hard and do not want to write it. However, it is important to improve your writing skills and it is also funny to read your blogs and other students’ blogs. That’s it for my last blog. I hope you guys do your best in this class!!^^
Sincerely,
The one who took class before you!!^^
Sunday, December 5, 2010
Blog 74
Saturday, December 4, 2010
Blog 73
Friday, December 3, 2010
Blog 72
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
Blog 70
Tuesday, November 30, 2010
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Monday, November 29, 2010
Blog 68
Many animals suffered harsh life on the Manor Farm. However, animals revolutionized against human so they banished human. The two pigs which are Snowball and Napoleon became leader of animals. The most powerful pigs were Snowball and Napoleon. However, they have different thought. Eventually, Napoleon became dictator after he banished Snowball. Also, the animals which followed Snowball were banished. However, life of animals was still harsh. The pigs which follow Napoleon only live well. The slogan is also changed from “Four legs are right and two legs are evil” to “Four legs and two legs are both right.” Pigs and human became very friendly. They trade many things and pigs enjoy it. Life of other animals became harsher than before. They can’t bear it anymore. Eventually, they up rise and banished pigs.
Former communist countries showed same process like story of Animal Farm. Many poor people suffered starving under control of corrupted empire and capitalism. Eventually, people revolutionized and collapsed empire and capitalism. However, result is worse than past. Many people worked hardly and freedom disappeared. Not only former leadership but also people who criticized communism were also killed and sent to prison. Only communist leadership lived well like former royal family and noble people. In addition, when economy situation became poor, they also accept capitalism countries. Of course, it is also allowed to only leadership people. They kept their dictatorship by forcing people continuously. Communist countries became more corrupted and poor. As a result, it was also connected to uprising.
Story of Animal Farm and result of communist countries showed that Communism is just theory. It is unavailable. Although capitalism has contradiction which difference between wealth and poverty, it has opportunity which even common people become wealth class. However, communism doesn’t have it. It only exist corrupted and poor situation. We have to choose capitalism for our future. Although it has contradiction, we have to fix it.
Sunday, November 28, 2010
Blog 67
However, I noticed that nationalism is for only one group of people. It means that sacrifice of other people is none of business. I started to read history of world. Many theories existed in our history. Imperialism and German Supremacy were good example. When Imperialism existed, many strong countries invaded and made weak countries as colony. As a result, people of weak countries like Asia, Africa, and South America suffered great pain. German Supremacy was worse than Imperialism. It caused Jewish Holocaust and World War II. As a result, the tragedy which more than 50 million people of the world died. Communism is little bit different but they also killed many people by name of nationalism. North Korea always insists nationalism to their people. However, it is only tool which they keep their dictatorship. Also, many people and countries conflicts until now because they still believe nationalism.
We are living 21st Century. We have to live together. Conflicts and hatred between people are remains of past. Nationalism also has to become remains of past. We live in the same world. We have to know it.
Thursday, November 25, 2010
Blog 66
Today for my blog, I am going to write about the drama I watched before (House). Nobody denies that it is thankful to live the life no matter how long they will live. However, more important thing is the way of living life to live happily. In this case, it is better to precede transplantation because even though one child can live only two and a half years, the other can live as long as he wants to live. Most of all, the one who can transplant can still live two and a half years and it is more important how he can live as happy as he can. Of course it is wrong to decrease one’s life but it can give more hopes for both his brother and their parents. The approach of this case would be different if he dies right away if the transplantation is proceed but since he still can live even though only for short time, he still has chance to live happily and his brother also has more chances. Most of all, their parents will not lose any of their child right away and can take care both for two and a half years. Life it is mentioned above, the length of life is not important, but how you live effectively and happily. The long life without pleasure cannot be mention as life. Therefore, it depends on a boy how he lives his short life but at least the chance has given to him.
Blog 65
For this blog, I am going to write about the video that I watched recently. Using animal for food or clothes seems to me that it is natural thing that the animals have to go through. In nature, herbivorous eats plants and are eaten by carnivorous. This is a natural relationship and right now, humans are the top of all animals. Like carnivorous eat other animals, humans also need food from animals and the only thing that is different from carnivorous animals is that we have the ability to raise animals just for food and we can butcher and cook. Clothing is also a thing that we need for life. Unlike other animals, we, humans, need clothes to protect our bodies and one of the materials is animal fur. In my opinion, unless we do not overproduce, like slaughtering cows more than what we need for food, using animals for necessities of life such as food and clothes is acceptable. I also agree with using animal in experiments, especially in the medical field. In science, the experiments are the most important thing, and have to be tried on animals before this technology can actually be used on humans. We cannot use humans as experiment just to protect the animal from this unless people do not want any improvements in science. However, nearly all people want improvements and it is impossible to do without experiments. It does not make sense to me that some people are against using animal as experiments, but still want science to be improved for their own life.
Blog 64
Many people think animal experimentation is too cruel for animals. Some scientists had experiments on animals without giving them any pain killers and that led them to death. It may not lead to death, but it gave animal great pain. The cruelest thing however, is keeping the animals alive without doing anything to relieve their pain from the experiments for effective results. According to the Animal Testing Facts, nearly 17 to 22 million animals are used in research every year. This shows that many animals are suffering just because of experimentation. Therefore, some people suggested testing on human cells by using technologies based on culturing cells. Other people also feel cruelty about animal experimentation, because they cannot understand how the people can use pets as lab rats. Since most people treat their pets as family, the animal experimentation for them is like sending their family to experimentation. Another opposing opinion was the doubt about the effectiveness of animal experimentation. The animals and humans are different species, which means that the types of disease they get are different. According to the American Medical Association, the animals and humans share only 1.16% of all diseases that are discovered until now. However, the biggest opposing factor that they argue is that most of animal experimentation is caused by human supremacism. Like humans, the animals also have the right to live and we actually ignore it because we think humans are superior over the animals. Just because they cannot speak does not mean that they do not have any thoughts. All of these opposing factors that they mentioned are reasonable. I hope you guys understand these factors too. Happy Thanksgiving!!^^
Wednesday, November 24, 2010
Blog 63
All of reason which causes this result is South Korean government tried to help North Korea. Of course, purpose was good because we tried to help North Koreans who suffer starving. However, it only made North Koreans became painful than before. I don’t know why South Korean government doesn’t correspond strongly. We supported many food and relief supplies before. Also, we tried to help North Korean economy best by tourism industry. However, the result is this. The past 10 years was meaningless period. If we didn’t help North Korea, they probably would be collapsed. In other words, our effort only helped their army and their leader. We don’t have to help North Korea anymore. If we try to help North Korea, people will suffer serious pain. Corrupted North Korean regime has to be collapsed for peace of Korea. However, stupid leftists in South Korea still try to believe North Korea. How silly it is. Leftists and corrupted North Korean regime are enemies of true Korean unification and peace. We have to reject them first.
Tuesday, November 23, 2010
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Monday, November 22, 2010
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Sunday, November 21, 2010
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Saturday, November 20, 2010
Blog 59
He was born as son of chief of Mongolian tribe. However, he didn’t spend convenient childhood. His father was assassinated by other tribe. Also, he and his family were expelled from tribe. Moreover, Mongol was warring period at that time. Even children were killed if they were man. Genghis Khan also experienced many dangers. He lived as slave for a while. Warring period was very painful to child. However, he didn’t give up. He had dream to make country which people can sleep at night. Although he couldn’t know how to write and read, he knew how to survive from that period. His only ability was to lead others. As a result, his small tribe became biggest tribe in the Mongol. In fact, name of Mongol is originated from name of Mongol which was name of Genghis Khan’s tribe. Although he conflicts many barriers, he beat all of them by strong self-confidence and good judgment and successes to unify Mongol highland. Also, he conquered many strong empires which close to Mongol without satisfying present. His no giving up mental attitude made him emperor of the Eurasian Continent.
Although Genghis Khan didn’t have much estate or couldn’t know how to read and write, he accomplished his dream. If we didn’t give up though we face danger, anybody can accomplish dream.
Friday, November 19, 2010
Blog 58
Thursday, November 18, 2010
Blog 57
Wednesday, November 17, 2010
Blog 56
Tuesday, November 16, 2010
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Monday, November 15, 2010
Blog 54
Despite all these judgments, YouTube has its defense. They say that Viacom’s argument not only judged and complained against them but also they are complaining against the Internet freedom which applies to all the exchange of information and communications ways among the internet. This is the statement that the research paper is trying to discover. It aims to figure out the limits of copyright law and what is illegal to do in the Internet and what is not. As it can be seen from the article “Copyright Laws caught in the web,” YouTube states that the company has agreements with content providers that allowed them to show legitimate copyrighted material while other videos in the site are protected by fair use.
Fair use it is similar to public domain, but it applies to copyrighted material, and means that everyone who uses copyrighted material must cite the source. YouTube also said that the site provides videos from amateur people who want to upload experiences or share them with others and the minority of the videos displayed in YouTube is not copyrighted. According to the definition of public domain, material that is not copyrighted can be available for anyone for free. However not all the information in the Internet is considered public domain, since a lot of it is copyrighted. The aim of these research papers is to explain the readers that sometimes people get confused about what applies for public domain and which are the laws for copyrighted material. People don’t really know that they have to cite videos taken from YouTube or even pay to have access to copyrighted material.
Sunday, November 14, 2010
Blog 53
Saturday, November 13, 2010
Blog52
When a baby reaches the preoperational stage, which is 2 to 7 years of age, I’ll let them express the egocentrism in the beginning. It is a natural thing for a baby at this period. However, as they grow older, around 5 to 6 years old, I’ll teach them to leave the egocentrism and understand the view of other people. Also, children of this period used to fail conservation. It would be good if I could teach them about volume of liquids, using two different containers and pouring liquid from one to another. From this, he would learn the rule of conservation and reversibility. For a child in the concrete operational stage, which is 7 to 11 years of age, he will start having mental operations, such as logical, mathematical, and spatial problems. During this stage, I’ll focus on teaching them simple algebra and geometric problems. These problems could help them to improve logical, mathematical, spatial thought.The final stage is formal operational stage, which begins at about 11, he will now be able to think hypothetically and abstractly. I’ll provide many questions about “What if” and lead a child to bring out his own hypothesis. If he can’t get proper reasoning, I would teach him the basic background concept of the question, and train his operating ability related with hypothesis.
Friday, November 12, 2010
Blog 51
The second reason for obesity is our life style. In the other nations people walk to wherever they need to go. For example, a house wife in East Asia can go to the grocery store, bank, and hospitals simply by walking. They don’t need to drive, becausetheir nations are small, every necessity in their life is closely packed together, and pedestrian lanes and public transportation are well-organized. However, our nation isn’t designed like that. The United States has a vast landscape and everything is spread out. People need a ride for every single thing and we are too used to riding cars to walk.
As mentioned above, we consume highly heavy food but burn up less calories than the other nations. I believe these are why our nation is suffering from a critical obesity epidemic.
Thursday, November 11, 2010
Blog 50
To increase attachment with a child, spending quality time with enough conversation is a basic necessity. Moreover, having adequate amount of skin-contact is important so that the child can make a social-emotional base with you.
Wednesday, November 10, 2010
Blog 49
However, there are still many subtle stereotypes lying beneath our society’s surface such that most people don’t even recognize them, and here are some examples;
Women are more emotional / Women are shop-a-holics / Men rarely make decisions based on feeling / Men work on one thing at a time, etc.
I don’t think there is very many things we can do for children to fix these subtle stereotypes. These examples are more than just cultural and social stereotypes. These are more likely the characteristics of each sex than stereotypes. Many of them are psychological characteristics with biological reasons in hormone levels, like depression in women during menses.
Also, in Korea, most of the women are controlling their husbands today… I do not know how this kind of problem happened. As a male, I think sometimes the husbands look poor. I do not even want males to control females. I just want males to have their right^^ I hope there are no more scary(?) wife in the families in Korea.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Blog 48
As I mentioned, I expect that sex education does not encourage teen pregnancy. Since sex education could provide answers to questions of that teens may have and warn them of the importance of contraception, it would be truly beneficial for teens.
Monday, November 8, 2010
Blog 47
Standardized tests are not designed for every individual, but for an average portion of society. Also, sometimes they are biased on many things including culture. Therefore, these tests can’t measure either exceptional individuals or people from outside of society who are not familiar with local culture. Moreover, many standardized tests are mostly focused on measuring one’s level of education rather than one’s true potential. Sometimes, an individual’s talents can’t be measure as a score. However, because of this systemic problem, many gifted people are not spotted but instead buried.
To fix these problems, huge reforms on the current system of our society is needed. First, there should be more than a few types of exams so one’s potential is not mistakenly missed. Second, standardized tests should not be biased on certain things such as culture. Most importantly, tests shouldn’t focus on showing what level of education that individual has, but reflect more the true potential of a person.
Sunday, November 7, 2010
Blog 46
Poor parenting is mostly because parents are uninformed. In many cases, they are still love their kids, but simply are ignorant about what’s the right thing to do for children. The best way to mitigate this problem is providing them with classes about how to take care of children, what’s good for them, and the righteous ways of parenting. This is the easiest case to mitigate, because as they still love their children but are simply uninformed, they would perform good parenting after the education.
Negative effects of divorce are a bit more difficult matter. Every organism is naturally selfish to survive. Since they have their own hardships and problems to deal with, parents can hardly take care of their children. I don’t think there is a best solution, but in my opinion, there should be support from both the family and social level. First, I know that they have a hard time too, but parents should put priority on their children, and try to provide adequate financial and emotional support. If there are relatives who can provide support, it would be better. Second, there should be a well-organized social support system such as custody parents or divorce mediation programs. Volunteers mostly provide current social support and organizations can’t support rapidly increasing divorce rates and millions of children who are currently suffering from the negative effects of divorce.
On the other hand, childhood abuse needs decisive measures, because it is unacceptable fault to abuse younglings, and a parent who has abused their children will highly abuse them again. There is no way to let these parents raise children, and we must deprive them of the right of custody, and take care of children in better places.
Saturday, November 6, 2010
Blog 45
Friday, November 5, 2010
Blog 44
Today, in our society, there are various kinds of organizations and most of the people are at least taking a part in the organization. Leader is the one who choose what the organization is going to do and take the responsibility of their members. And while the organizations are dealing with the problems, it is hard for everyone to be happy with what the organizations are doing. Some members may sacrifice for their organizations. Maybe sacrifice is not a right word to use in here. It sounds like the leaders damage the members on purpose. Some leaders have ambitions and do not care about their members no matter what. However, for others, they have belief that no one is hurt regardless of the situation. Rather they think that either all or none get equal amount of harm. In my opinion, for this topic, leaders should deal with the problems even though some members get damaged. Though, it is only for a goal to the whole organization get benefit. For the members who did not get any harm or only got benefits by their bosses’ decision, they will like their bosses. However, even though the bosses’ decision benefits the organizations, for the members who got harm even it is small amount number of people, they would not like their bosses. So, ‘Good boss’ does not mean ‘Good boss’ for everyone. Some people may say “He is the worst boss I ever met!” I hope you guys like your bosses~
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Blog 43
As we see, there are a lot of unhealthy fast foods in America. Even people eat only one; they can take almost all of the calories they need for a whole day. Also, those foods contain lots of fats and sodium which are not good for people’s health. However, Subway also has some meals with high calories. Even though it is not high as the least healthy meal in America, it is high enough for a one meal. So, if you chose Subway as a meal, I would like to recommend you to try real healthy meal, which has lower calories than others.
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
Blog 42
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
Blog 41
First of all, there are various convenient systems or infrastructures including public transportations, medical facilities, and more. By using the subway and city bus, people can quickly go to any destinations wherever they want by paying rational cost. Moreover, citizens can be favored by the medical care service at the nearest hospital in the situation of getting any injuries or diseases. Furthermore, it is easy to purchase various products or supplies in the mall at anytime. Compare to metropolitan, in small towns, people have to go to other cities to get high quality medical treatments and products, and even have to take long time to get there. However, metropolitans don’t have to waste their time. They can access to all of benefits immediately at where they live.
Second, there are more opportunities such as employment. Since the service industry is abundant and many companies are placing their headquarters and branches in cities, labor power and employees are always highly demanded. Moreover, as a city has more occupations in various fields, it is easier to find a job that individuals are looking for. For example, there is no or very limited demand on the jobs related with IT or computer engineering. Therefore, even if a member of small towns is fascinated about IT, it would be hard to find a proper job or to insure adequate income. However, comparing a small town or rural place, there are great amount of job opportunities related with those fields in a big city.
As it is mentioned above, metropolitan provides many benefits to its residents. It might be true that a big city has some negative factors such as pollution and high crime rate. However, still its numerous points provide benefits to comfort many people rather than exacerbate people’s life status.
Monday, November 1, 2010
Blog 40
Sunday, October 31, 2010
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Saturday, October 30, 2010
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Friday, October 29, 2010
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Thursday, October 28, 2010
Blog 36
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
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Tuesday, October 26, 2010
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Monday, October 25, 2010
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Sunday, October 24, 2010
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Saturday, October 23, 2010
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Friday, October 22, 2010
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Thursday, October 21, 2010
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Wednesday, October 20, 2010
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Tuesday, October 19, 2010
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Monday, October 18, 2010
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Sunday, October 17, 2010
Blog 25
In the journal “Tributional for North Korea” by Suzanne Scholte, she is claiming that North Korea Government should be punished after collapse of the regime. She gave typical example how North Korea government is evil. According to her example, North Korean mother and daughter who escaped to China were separated. Mother tried to search her daughter best. However, she heard terrible story. Chinese security agents had forced the daughter back to North Korea. The North Korean border guards who arrested her beat 14-year-old girl to death. Not only this mother and daughter but also the other North Korean refugees suffered this kind of terrible experiences. She said that all of people in the South Korea have interest about human rights of North Koreans. It is very sad that while South Korea is right next to North Korea that uses the same language as ours, we cannot do anything. I hope Korea unify as soon as possible.
Saturday, October 16, 2010
Blog24
Bullying arose from social problem. People who lead to bully had poor environment like family and childhood. If they did not have a good and happy childhood, their characteristics went from bad to worse. For example, if they did not receive love from parents, they show their anger against their parents by bullying others. Poor environment social problem causes another social problem, which is bullying.
If bullying arises from social problem, it also causes another problem. Feelings like uneasiness, depression, and delusions of persecution are good example. High school student who suffered from these symptoms said that he was bullied by his classmates in school because of his personality and face. He could not bear it so he refused to go to school or even talk with anybody. As a result, he even started to say that he wanted to die. It is common symptom not only him but also others who suffered bullying before.
In conclusion, bullying is one of the most serious social problems. All of people in our society should have interest and recognize about bullying. Bullying already becomes social problem. People have to stop bullying others. They have to calm down when they’re angry. If they just be little more calm, then the society will be better.
Friday, October 15, 2010
Blog 23
There would be many possibilities according to the circumstances, if I were Neo, I mean, if I were on his circumstances, I would eat the red pill, because Neo kept wondering what the matrix was, and he also felt that the world he lived (the digital world) was not quite right. And he was curious who the Morphius was. In other words, he needed a whole new life.
But if I, right now, have to make choice, I think I will eat the blue pill. I think I’m well tamed to this world. Maybe I did adapt well to this social system.
Neo took his path with his own mind. But for me, I was trained in school, to adapt well in society. Country also wants its citizens to be in calm situation. Also, my senses are hard to ignore. I see, listen, feel, and think and they are really hard that the world I live in is not actually real.
Humans have been resisting to the nature, adapted, and evolved in order to make quick move to changes. But I think, by making society and social system, humans became less sensitive to the change of the thinking.